Request Letter

Walrisra Alamoudi
279/3 M.4 Phahonyothin Road Phahonyothin 62
Kukot Lumlukka Patumtanee 12130

December 09, 2010

Sales Manager
Anantasila Resort
Takiab, Hua-Hin

Dear Sales Manager :

On December 29, 2010, my family is planning to go to HuaHin, I would like to reserve a sea view family room at a lowest possible rate for 4 nights 5 days from December 29, 2010. I enclose one thousand baht check.

We wil need a room for five peopl, 2 bedrooms and 1 small living room. I would like room on the first floor because I am bringing my 80 year old grandmother. Can you provide baby food for 2 year old if possible. I would like to know the facilities that you will provide us.

I would appreciate the answer by December 11, 2010, so I can prepare for everything.

If you need more information please contact Walrisra Alamoudi, 0866222671.
Thank you for your kind assistance.

Sincerely yours,

Walrisra Alamoudi


Enclosure

W.A.

complaint letter

Rupendra Shrestha
Ekamai 12, Sukumvit 63
Bangkok 10110

November 25th, 2010

Dr. Roxy Pestello
Niva International School
Ladprao 101

Dear Dr. Roxy Pestello:

The BISAC is coming nearer and you might as well know, our football pitch is in a very poor condition. the grass is upturned and its not neatly cut and the net is torn up too.

just last week we were having a practice session. sprinting session was weird because the level of grass is uneven. After scoring a goal the ball went behind the net again and again which was somewhat hectic. i have listed the problems in the attachment.

it would be very kind of you to go through the list of amendments that should be made in the football field as soon as possible. it would be even better if you would make additional improvements in facilities. if you require any further information you can contact me at 111-2222-111

thank you for your positive and prompt response to this matter.

sincerely,
signature
Rupendra Shrestha
enclosures

request letter

Rupendra Shrestha  

Ekamai 12, sukumvit 63

Bangkok, 10111                

                                                                                               

November  25^th, 2010

Reservation Manager

Anantasila Resort  

Takiab, Hua Hin

Dear Reservation Manager:

I was going through the internet and came across your website. I would like you to know that I am looking for a place to stay during my five day holiday with my family. I went through your website and the facilities you provide, and I must say, I am quite impressed and likely will be staying in your resort. I have a few enquires and requirements though, that I have attached it to the enclosures.

Since I will be traveling with my family it would be really nice if you could find me a place with the view of the beach and the sea at the lowest price you can offer. Please be informed that my grandmother and my 2 year old son will be accompanying me. So, I would like you to send me information if you have a safe playground in the garden for my grandmother and my son to play so they can both enjoy. It would be really helpful if you could get me a room with a living room for a family time too.

I would really appreciate if you could reply promptly so that I could make my decision as soon as possible. It would also help if you could send me the details of the facilities that your resort provides.

Thank you for your time and hoping to get your quick reply.

If you have anything to ask or any information that you require, then you can contact me at 0844544967 or my email: keyboard_mouse@hotmail.com

Sincerely,

Signature

Rupendra Shrestha

Enclosures

request letter

Ric Malkiel Canullas                                                                                                                                                klong 3 preuksa 13 soi 2/4 37/659                                                                                                                         Moo 4 klong luang Pathum Thani 12120                                                                                                              December 20, 2010

Reservation manager                                                                                                                                             Anantasia resort                                                                                                                                                          Tai kub Hua Hin

Dear reservation manager:

I was researching and browsing through the internet for a place to stay for a week in. I came along your resort and it really caught my attention because of the facilities that you have in your resort and it looks like a really nice place to stay and relax during Christmas.

I was wondering if it is possible to have a room with three beds and has a view of the open sea. I will be coming with my wife and my two kids so it would be nice if we also had a good place to stay with each other maybe like a game room or a big living room. I would also want to know until how long is your gym and basketball court open because I have work during the morning so I am mostly free during the evening.

It would really help me to have your reply within the next few days so that I can decide on my choices, it would also be good if you can send information like parties that we can attend in your resort to further enjoy the holiday.

Here is my number if you need more information 0866029030. I haope to get your reply soon , thank you for your time.

Sincerely,

Signature

Ric Mlkaiel Canullas

RMC

Complaint Letter

Ric Malkiel San Pedro Canullas                                                                                                                                          Preuksa 13 soi 2/4 moo 4 klong3                                                                                                       klong luang Pathum Thani 12120                                                                                                                                               November 25, 2010

Dr. Roxy/Mr. Anthony                                                                                                                                                Niva International School Ladprao 101

Dear Mr.  Anthony and Dr. Roxy,

We will be having the interhouse basketball team soon so we should have a solution to the slippery court to prevent players from slipping and getting injured. Most of the people who play basketball say thath the basketball court is very slippery.

I hope we can improve the condition of the basketball court, or at least try to think of a solution to protect our students.

 I hope we can bring this topic up in the next meeting as soon as possible. If it is possible maybe we can try adding some solution so that the court could be better played in. If there are other soltions please notify me about these suggestions and we can discuss for the better solution.

Thank you for your time in reading this letter and thank you for your kind gratitude in helping us out. Any additional information I should know please contact me at 0866029030.

Sincerely,

Signature

Ric Malkiel Canullas

RMC

Complain letter

Walrisra Alamoudi
279/3 M.4 Phahonyotinn Road. Phahonyothin 62
Kukot Lumlukka Patumtanee 12130
November 25, 2010

Mr. Nathan Anthony
CEO, Niva International School
10240, Bangkok, Thailand

Dear Mr. Nathan:

On November 19, 2010 I was using a computer in the library. When I turned on one of the computers it was not working and this happened to other 5 computers.

This problem might not be important to you but for us students, we need to use the computers to work, but the computers are not enough and soe were broken also. This caused chaos in the computer secion in the library, because students need to fight for using a computer, I have observe this for 4 days alreasdy.

It would be nice, if this problem could be fixed as soon as possible by putting new computers with updated program in the library. If you need any additiuonal information please contact Walrisra Alamoudi, Grade 11B

Thank you for your concern,

Sincerely,

Walrisra Alamoudi

Persuasive essay: evaluating ads ( Viva Cuba Libre)

People cheering for joy, “Viva Cuba Libre”, raises up glasses of Bacardi, one of the most famous alcohol brands! “Bacardi celebrates the independence of Cuba”. Bacardi shows that they are able to compete with other alcoholic brands with peace and with no violence. They are targeting all adults who likes drinking, and celebrating. Bacardi uses black back-ground, and uses light color fonts to stand it out with the “main” picture, glass of Bacardi with lime in it. Since the main theme is celebration of independence, they put two Cuban army on the left, and two main modern people at the right cheering for independence. This ad proves that Bacardi is able to stand out above other alcohol drinks and ads, but they omitted some parts in the ad that are important, such as the price of the product in which could be easily changed.
This Bacardi ad shows many positive aspects such as its repetition. Since the whole ad is about cheering for liberty, they repeated word ‘Cuba Libre” which means Cuba liberty in Latin. The word Bacardi rum is also repeated many times in the ad, just incase for the people who never knew what Bacardi is. The composition of the ad is also very wisely used and chose. They used black colored background, but use bolded gold color font which stands-out and catches reader’s attention. The biggest picture there was just simply this glass of Bacardi rum with lime, and it could already tell us everything about the ad even though there are very less words.
This advertisement uses Pathos, logos, patriotism, and transfer as there advertising techniques. The ad itself attracts our feeling (pathos) because they told us the ingredient they used to drink during the celebration of independence. They also showed patriotism, such as the background, there are Cuban people and army celebrating their holiday and pride of Cuba.
There are lots of positive aspects about this ad but there are also some negative; the negative aspects are consists of omission, and diversion. In the case of omission, the description of the ad, they wrote the ingredients they use to make the rum they drank during the celebration, but they didn’t tell us how many percent of rum is needed and the percent of lime needed. The next negative aspect is the diversion in the ad. They used a very interesting historical scene about Cuba to drag our attention away from the negative flaws in the ad, such as the soldiers of Cuba cheering for their independence with the Bacardi rum.
Bacardi proves that they are able to compete and stand out against other alcoholic soft drinks. This ad does a good job in convincing the readers because of its interesting design and the given recipe for making the independence rum. To me, this ad is very attractive and convincing; it got less word, but big and clear pictures. I’m an adult and I saw this a, I would definitely try out this drink together with it’s given recipe. This ad still could improve if they could tell us its price and the exact percentage of rum and lime to put in order to make their independence rum. Overall, this ad done a very good job in catching people’s attention and most importantly, persuading people to buy their product.