Walrisra Alamoudi
279/3 M.4 Phahonyotinn Road. Phahonyothin 62
Kukot Lumlukka Patumtanee 12130
November 25, 2010
Mr. Nathan Anthony
CEO, Niva International School
10240, Bangkok, Thailand
Dear Mr. Nathan:
On November 19, 2010 I was using a computer in the library. When I turned on one of the computers it was not working and this happened to other 5 computers.
This problem might not be important to you but for us students, we need to use the computers to work, but the computers are not enough and soe were broken also. This caused chaos in the computer secion in the library, because students need to fight for using a computer, I have observe this for 4 days alreasdy.
It would be nice, if this problem could be fixed as soon as possible by putting new computers with updated program in the library. If you need any additiuonal information please contact Walrisra Alamoudi, Grade 11B
Thank you for your concern,
Sincerely,
Walrisra Alamoudi
-typo error? "soe" for "some"
ReplyDelete-"it would be nice" informal...use "I would be grateful for..."
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