Walrisra Alamoudi
279/3 M.4 Phahonyothin Road Phahonyothin 62
Kukot Lumlukka Patumtanee 12130
December 09, 2010
Sales Manager
Anantasila Resort
Takiab, Hua-Hin
Dear Sales Manager :
On December 29, 2010, my family is planning to go to HuaHin, I would like to reserve a sea view family room at a lowest possible rate for 4 nights 5 days from December 29, 2010. I enclose one thousand baht check.
We wil need a room for five peopl, 2 bedrooms and 1 small living room. I would like room on the first floor because I am bringing my 80 year old grandmother. Can you provide baby food for 2 year old if possible. I would like to know the facilities that you will provide us.
I would appreciate the answer by December 11, 2010, so I can prepare for everything.
If you need more information please contact Walrisra Alamoudi, 0866222671.
Thank you for your kind assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Walrisra Alamoudi
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Thursday, 9 December 2010
Complain letter
Walrisra Alamoudi
279/3 M.4 Phahonyotinn Road. Phahonyothin 62
Kukot Lumlukka Patumtanee 12130
November 25, 2010
Mr. Nathan Anthony
CEO, Niva International School
10240, Bangkok, Thailand
Dear Mr. Nathan:
On November 19, 2010 I was using a computer in the library. When I turned on one of the computers it was not working and this happened to other 5 computers.
This problem might not be important to you but for us students, we need to use the computers to work, but the computers are not enough and soe were broken also. This caused chaos in the computer secion in the library, because students need to fight for using a computer, I have observe this for 4 days alreasdy.
It would be nice, if this problem could be fixed as soon as possible by putting new computers with updated program in the library. If you need any additiuonal information please contact Walrisra Alamoudi, Grade 11B
Thank you for your concern,
Sincerely,
Walrisra Alamoudi
279/3 M.4 Phahonyotinn Road. Phahonyothin 62
Kukot Lumlukka Patumtanee 12130
November 25, 2010
Mr. Nathan Anthony
CEO, Niva International School
10240, Bangkok, Thailand
Dear Mr. Nathan:
On November 19, 2010 I was using a computer in the library. When I turned on one of the computers it was not working and this happened to other 5 computers.
This problem might not be important to you but for us students, we need to use the computers to work, but the computers are not enough and soe were broken also. This caused chaos in the computer secion in the library, because students need to fight for using a computer, I have observe this for 4 days alreasdy.
It would be nice, if this problem could be fixed as soon as possible by putting new computers with updated program in the library. If you need any additiuonal information please contact Walrisra Alamoudi, Grade 11B
Thank you for your concern,
Sincerely,
Walrisra Alamoudi
Wednesday, 17 November 2010
Persuasive Essay: Evaluating ad
As I scanned through the magazine, a picture of a soup-like thing grabbed my attention, with its word “100% lean meat and a full serving of vegetables.” The ad’s purpose is to let the product be known by the public. The ad’s description suggests that it suits working people who have no time to make breakfast. This ad, from “it’s amazing what soup can do,” effectively communicates that eating this soup gives full nutrients. However, the negative aspect of this ad is omission.
The soup ad’s features and words are persuasive because of its image which shows what is inside the soup, and 100% lean meat is a good attention grabber. It could be clearly seen that the repetition of the product name “Campbell’s Chunky” is all over the advertisement. Another phrase that is being repeated is 100% lean meat and full serving of vegetables. The word and phrase that are repeating make the audience attached to the ad and make them interested in the product.
The soup ad is also effectively persuasive because of using composition. Composition of this ad involves the white background which stands out the text and the picture of the product. The red color of the product itself makes the ad more attractive. It is important to use a good composition to make the ad look nicer and more persuasive.
To persuade the readers to buy the product, the ad uses association. Association is able to transfer the feeling of the readers toward the ad, and they will buy it. The ad taps into the audience feeling to make them hungry and yet, to buy the product. This ad is logos type, it uses facts: 100% lean meat and 1/2 cup of vegetables in 1 cup of soup. This information shows that the soup is full of nutrients and is perfect for those workers with rush hours in the morning. Another means of association include plain folks and patriotism.
For plain folks as the target audience is working people with no time to make breakfast, they are ordinary people so plain folks suit the ad. The ad is also patriotism because this product is one of the sponsors of “The NFL or National Football League.” This simple statement could make fans of the league interested in the ad.
This ad is not persuasive because it omits negative information about the price and certification from FDA. The price might not be important, but this ad doesn’t put any certification and make the product looks not safety. The ad diverse the attention of the audience to the repetition word and phrase of the ad, so the audience will not be thinking of any certification any way.
The soup ad can persuade the target audience because of its information and picture which was well presented on the ad. This ad can be improved by putting the certification from FDA to make the product looks safe and more reliable. This ad is a good ex maple of effective persuasive ad because of the repetition but could be better if the omitting of if negative information is canceled.
The soup ad’s features and words are persuasive because of its image which shows what is inside the soup, and 100% lean meat is a good attention grabber. It could be clearly seen that the repetition of the product name “Campbell’s Chunky” is all over the advertisement. Another phrase that is being repeated is 100% lean meat and full serving of vegetables. The word and phrase that are repeating make the audience attached to the ad and make them interested in the product.
The soup ad is also effectively persuasive because of using composition. Composition of this ad involves the white background which stands out the text and the picture of the product. The red color of the product itself makes the ad more attractive. It is important to use a good composition to make the ad look nicer and more persuasive.
To persuade the readers to buy the product, the ad uses association. Association is able to transfer the feeling of the readers toward the ad, and they will buy it. The ad taps into the audience feeling to make them hungry and yet, to buy the product. This ad is logos type, it uses facts: 100% lean meat and 1/2 cup of vegetables in 1 cup of soup. This information shows that the soup is full of nutrients and is perfect for those workers with rush hours in the morning. Another means of association include plain folks and patriotism.
For plain folks as the target audience is working people with no time to make breakfast, they are ordinary people so plain folks suit the ad. The ad is also patriotism because this product is one of the sponsors of “The NFL or National Football League.” This simple statement could make fans of the league interested in the ad.
This ad is not persuasive because it omits negative information about the price and certification from FDA. The price might not be important, but this ad doesn’t put any certification and make the product looks not safety. The ad diverse the attention of the audience to the repetition word and phrase of the ad, so the audience will not be thinking of any certification any way.
The soup ad can persuade the target audience because of its information and picture which was well presented on the ad. This ad can be improved by putting the certification from FDA to make the product looks safe and more reliable. This ad is a good ex maple of effective persuasive ad because of the repetition but could be better if the omitting of if negative information is canceled.
Sunday, 26 September 2010
Dealing with heartaches
Do you ever have hard times figuring out what in the world had happened after your girlfriend or boyfriend broke up with you? Most teenagers nowadays have problem on their love, mostly being dumped, and the big, big reason is the relationship is not working, there are effects on this it is that they can’t continue or concentrate on the activities that are going around them. This essay will gives ways to deal with break up such as, cut off contact, let it out, stay busy, stay single, and getting help.
According to love-session.com (2006, love-session) two of the big main reasons of breaking up is “The relationship is not working well” and “I want to be independent”. These are two reasons why teenagers broke up because each and everyone has their own world and thinking but they are not talking together and then “I think I want to be single”, then breaking up is the only solution at then. Another reason is stay alone is more free, Everyone can do anything they wish to, don’t have to care for another person, just to do in what he or she wants.
What comes after being dumped is heartaches, can’t concentrate on anything, try to forget him or her but it is very hard, the memories are stick in the brain. Here comes solution to these and other more problems. One solution that I tried and it works is cutting off contact, well cutting off contacts will make anyone who do a severe pain in the heart, but the truth is that one will realize that chances of getting back together is no more that is the end of the story. This will help one in long term, believe me.
Another solution to heartbroken is suggested from e how.com (2009, e.how) is that to let everything in that pain out. If you want to cry, then cry like waterfall. If you want to yell, then yell as loud as you can. By this way it will help the one who is having a severe pain to heal that pain faster because if one is crying until having no more tears to cry by then one, will feel much better because letting everything out.
One more bad solution that is not worthy to so is committed to suicide, before thinking to suicide think first does that person really worth for your life, think of one parents will they be proud or will they be happy to see their own child suicide because of love. If one is thinking of this it means that one is stupid to throw the life for just a guy or a girl that did not even love them. After following my advice one will be better for hundred percent I guaranteed that. Believe me those two solutions above me will give you the results that you’ll never regret.
Bibliography :
e how. (2008), How to deal with you heart broken from
http://www.ehow.com/way_53170993_do-youre-heartbroken.html,
Retrieved on September 21,2010
Love-session.com (no date), Relationship and Love Desire from
http://www.love-session.com/why_break_up.htm,
Retrieved on September 22, 2010
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